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结构：

首先要明确事件发生的时间和地点。（The_______(事件)happened_______(时间和地点)The accident happened on the street last Sunday.(事故发生在上周日的街道上。)

提到你当时正在做什么？（At that time, l was_______(正在做的事)。例如：At that time, I was walking my dog.(那时我正在遛狗。)

描述事件发生前的情况。（lt was sunny day and things were awfully_______(形容词)before it happened）。像Itwasunnydayandthingswereawfullycalmbeforefore it happened.(事发前，天气晴朗，一切都很平静。)

接着说明是什么吸引了你的注意力？（Then_______(事件)drew my attention）。例如：Thenaloudnoisedrew my attention.(接着，一声巨响引起了我的注意。)

详细说明看到的事件（l saw______(详细说明事件)。例如：I saw a car hit a tree.(我看见一辆车撞到了树上。)

表达自己的感受（and to my______(表达感情的名词)。举例来说：and to my surprise(令我吃惊的是)。

描述当事人正在进行的行为。（the_______(当事人)was_______(正在进行的动作) driver was trying to get out of the car.(司机正试图从车里出来。)

讲述自己的感受（lt did not last very long, but it impressed me so deeply that l would_______(自己的感觉)。举例来说：It did not last very long, but it impressed me so deeply that I would never forget it.(这件事没有持续多久，但是给我留下了深刻的印象，我永远不会忘记。)